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Florence Acosta's avatar

This is such a sharp piece. I love how the repetition makes the message hit harder, especially the contrast between credentials and real merit.

UpsilonA's avatar

thanks @Florence Acosta. I hadn’t actually given too much thought to the repetition, it’s part of the form I used here in this poem, but it does certainly come across as you said, and amplify the effect. Thanks again

MoTy's avatar

Legally brilliant, like a chalk on the blackboard. Great work x

UpsilonA's avatar

Thanks @MoTy