The idea behind this one isn't that it reaches for meaning; it lets meaning cohere. The absence of an observer isn’t a trick—it’s the ethical stance of the poem.
I thought I'd offer some more grounding. New form for me. Maybe explain better. There's more coming. I've been working on these for some time before this one.
Quietly stunning. It captures that suspended moment where time loosens its grip and recognition does all the speaking: tender, restrained, and deeply human.
The idea behind this one isn't that it reaches for meaning; it lets meaning cohere. The absence of an observer isn’t a trick—it’s the ethical stance of the poem.
You are welcome. :)
A side note I didn’t expect to see in comments x
I thought I'd offer some more grounding. New form for me. Maybe explain better. There's more coming. I've been working on these for some time before this one.
I think I know what you mean.
Creative . Lovely. Awesome.
Thank you for reading, much appreciated.
Good, keep them coming x
It's beautiful ❤️
some things don’t end… they just shift into something quieter.
Quietly stunning. It captures that suspended moment where time loosens its grip and recognition does all the speaking: tender, restrained, and deeply human.
Thank you so much. That’s the spot, exactly where the poem wanted to live. Quietly.