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Florence Acosta's avatar

There’s something timeless about this. It captures how love has a way of making everything else fade, leaving only two hearts fully present with each other. 🩷

UpsilonA's avatar

Thank you so much @Florence Acosta. You always seem to get what I’m trying to do with my words, thank you.

Willow Crane's avatar

UpsilonA, the language here is stunning — it doesn't just describe intimacy, it moves like it. That shift from resistance into that final quiet hum stayed with me.

Beautifully written. With appreciation. Carried with care!

UpsilonA's avatar

Thank you so much. Such a nice comment, also. Thanks for taking the time.

Willow Crane's avatar

You are welcome!

Christine Haas's avatar

Yep. I love your words.

Christine Haas's avatar

Oh my God. I love this poem. This is seriously one of the best poems I’ve read, and now I’ve read two in one day. I literally feel this in my body.. I love this. Thank you.

UpsilonA's avatar

Wow, what a lovely comment, thank you so much. Delighted you enjoyed it.