Authors note. Eira Linden set a challenge, a game.
Sestina
Our words - 1. tree 2. leaf 3. fire 4. plunk 5. velvet 6. sky
Plunk Eira? Seriously?
I slightly broke the form, but hey. It’s too pretty.
Well…
This is the result.
I. The Hill Holds Its Breath by [Eira Linden] The hill holds its breath around a single tree each movement slowed to the fall of a leaf somewhere beneath, the roots remember fire a sound breaks through it, sudden, a dull plunk as if the earth has swallowed something in velvet and refuses to return it to the sky The light stretches thin across the sky caught and tangled in the limbs of a tree the ground answers back with another plunk a body dropped softly, a loosening leaf everything wrapped in a hush like velvet but underneath it all, the old insistence of fire There was a time this place spoke only in fire before it learned the patience of sky before the language of falling became plunk before stillness rooted itself into tree before the slow grammar of leaf before silence dressed itself in velvet Now it settles, layered and deep as velvet holding the echo of its earlier fire the branches reaching without asking the sky each letting go marked by a drifting leaf each landing answered by the quiet plunk of time collecting at the base of the tree You hear it if you stand long enough, the plunk not loud, but certain, like a pulse through velvet the whole field leaning toward the tree as if waiting for a sign of fire but only receiving the open, empty sky and the endless rehearsal of the falling leaf And still it continues, each leaf finding its place with a final plunk beneath the indifferent stretch of sky the ground closing over it in velvet keeping quiet what once was fire feeding it back, slowly, into the tree Envoi So the leaf returns again to the tree not through rising, but through sky and velvet through the soft insistence of plunk and fire
II. Plunk in the Middle by [UpsilonA] The forest screamed with fire gravity had given up, just sky. I swam deliberately in her velvet. What the actual plunk. If grief were the leaf, then me becomes tree. Not me—no, I refuse tree. Still the forest barks its old fire. Silence wraps me in warm velvet, soft only until a falling leaf hits with its small, stabbing plunk before hope can even see the sky. Twist, turn half blind, consume the sky, more delectable than any tree. I name each aching demon, one leaf. Who am I to try… to become fire. Enticing thoughts seduce with velvet, even the truest word lands with a plunk. I burned a long, slow, private plunk, detonating across earth, a startled sky. Life moved slow, refusing the old fire, built, rebuilt, muzzled into tree. Lying to myself it could be another leaf, I descend, stumble, fall into her velvet. I rise jagged, scraped red against velvet, every thought dripping its private plunk. I lick each wound, each borrowed leaf because I mistook root hunger for tree. Add fuel. Burn twist turn. Become fire. Change channel. Static humdrum sky. Static hums, bruise beneath the sky, and I drag my pulse across raw velvet. Every truth I spit hits with its own plunk, naming what’s left of me, leaf by leaf. I breathe the scorch, swallow the old fire, stand unmasked, unmaking the shape of tree. Envoi I stand where I once fell, unmaking tree and fire, naming each bruise that rose toward sky through velvet, every last truth dropped its plunk, leaf after leaf.







So well written
You two complement each other well. Given it was built on just six words, this turned out surprisingly long - unless there are rules I'm missing. The graphics are a nice touch too.