Edges softened by sea, heart sharpened by absence
Floaty! A drifter who knows the shape of the shore suffers longing the most.
Beautiful, very clean lines. This one is my favorite: "I know I need her — more than spoken maps,"
Also, I like how you use the divider button to part your stanzas; that's a cool use of this interface.
Thank you, all my words are deliberate, some always mean more than others though, this poem is one of them.
Love this
Nice use of rhyme, too!
Floaty! A drifter who knows the shape of the shore suffers longing the most.
Beautiful, very clean lines. This one is my favorite: "I know I need her — more than spoken maps,"
Also, I like how you use the divider button to part your stanzas; that's a cool use of this interface.
Thank you, all my words are deliberate, some always mean more than others though, this poem is one of them.
Love this
Nice use of rhyme, too!