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Hiv.brushes's avatar

Apart we long-ache. Together we wildfire" stopped me cold. The way you've stripped this down to pure nerve and still made it feel so vast… that's rare. Quietly devastating work.

UpsilonA's avatar

thank you, there’s more to come. I’m trying to get to the heart of grammar and make it feel more real

Hiv.brushes's avatar

that comes through so clearly there's a real discipline in what you're doing, like you're excavating meaning rather than decorating it. i'll be reading whatever comes next

MoTy's avatar

One self-assured poet. Lovely piece x

UpsilonA's avatar

Thanks @MoTy

Leonorra Dainler's avatar

“The real thing was always more than enough!”

What more is there to say ! Relationships summed up in eight words 👏👏👏👏

UpsilonA's avatar

You got it in a nutshell, we more often than not over-complicate things when the simple truth is often the best.