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EJ Kemp's avatar

I love the way you toy with the words and they sort of tumble and kind of build. Very interesting things at play here!

UpsilonA's avatar

Thank you. This one was very much about descent, certainly most of it.

Caner Şen's avatar

Nice one in a subtle psychedelic simplicity...

MoTy's avatar

You had me at “any socket

that hisses quiet”. Must erase from my mind immediately to prevent unconscious coping.

UpsilonA's avatar

Laughing currently. It's nice to hit in unexpected ways.

John Sheils's avatar

That’s so good. Really cool poem.

John Sheils's avatar

Well you achieved it beautifully, I felt I was right there in the room with you.

UpsilonA's avatar

Thanks very much. It's about a period a long time ago. I tried to be as sensory and immersed as possible in the thought.

Awaken The Legend Within's avatar

Great piece and brilliantly written.

UpsilonA's avatar

Thank you so much

Sovereign Lady xxx 🩷's avatar

Beautifully written! Outstanding!

Well done 👏 ✔️ 👍 👌 love this! 😘❤️🙏✍️

Love you

Sovereign Lady 🩷 xxx

A New Substack Author 🙏 ✍️ 🩷

UpsilonA's avatar

Thanks so much. This one is kind of aftermath/followup to my previous one.

Sovereign Lady xxx 🩷's avatar

You are most welcome 🙏 🤗! Truly deserved 👏 ❤️!

Love you

Sovereign Lady 🩷 xxx

A New Substack Author 🙏 ✍️ 🩷 ✨️