I arrived at the rate the poem did! You did exactly what you set out to do. When I read poetry that speaks truth, I feel the words landing in my body - not just my mind. Something opens, expands, and I'm left with a deeply felt sense of knowing that lives beyond language.
Wow! I was totally drawn in - Beautiful and Powerful!
I wanted people to arrive at the rate the poem did, that was what I was attempting anyway.
I arrived at the rate the poem did! You did exactly what you set out to do. When I read poetry that speaks truth, I feel the words landing in my body - not just my mind. Something opens, expands, and I'm left with a deeply felt sense of knowing that lives beyond language.